Animals should be treated with the same respect as people
Animals should be treated with the same respect as people
From an early childhood people are supposed to protect and respect animals. The problem of violence against animals have been discussed many times. Consider what constitutues cruel treatment of animals, on the one hand, and what demonstrates kind attitude to them.
In the article by Laura El Katini. “How We Treat Animals Reflects Our Society.” Https://Www.thenational.ae/about-Us, 11 Oct. 2016, bit.ly/2QlGl0H raises the issue of bringing up children on the part of relationship with animals. The author asks an important question: Do we try to set an example to our children through our actions and deeds? We take our children to the zoo and we show them how wild animals are kept in confinement. We can be angry and aggressive about pets. Also Laura tells that “Thousands of pets are discarded every year on our streets as families move abroad or just because they are no longer wanted. “ So, for a start, cruelty towards animals is adults' fault, because some parents don’t explain consequences of this actions.
Once, I have heard that animals as well as people have their rights. I agree completely. However, our rights are different. There is an article about Full animal rights and Right to humane treatment on the BBC website
(http://www.bbc.co.uk/ethics/animals/rights/positions_1.shtml ). In this article I have found information about animals' rights. Also it is morally wrong for human beings to be cruel to animals, and morally good for human beings to be kind to animals. People are homo sapiens, and we should protect creatures that have less power than we do.
People should not forget that protecting animals is supporting diversity of ecosystems. In schools we have been learned about such Earth's ecosystems as Grass - Insects - Birds and Herbivorous - Mammals - People. Nothing has changed since ancient times. When people protect animals they protect the planet and themselves. That does not carry the right that humans may make fun of animals and be cruel. We should coexist with others in a peaceful atmosphere.
People should not forget that protecting animals is supporting diversity of ecosystems. In schools we have been learned about such Earth's ecosystems as Grass - Insects - Birds and Herbivorous - Mammals - People. Nothing has changed since ancient times. When people protect animals they protect the planet and themselves. That does not carry the right that humans may make fun of animals and be cruel. We should coexist with others in a peaceful atmosphere.
To sum it up, I’d like to say that humans should be reasonable and intelligent, because none of creatures deserves cruelty. Animals should be treated with the same respect as people.
ОтветитьУдалитьThanks for sharing your essay draft with us. I had a quick look at it yesterday evening and am going to discuss it with you in class today to help you with its revision.
Rimma,
Удалитьthe information you have shared with your peers and me in this post is very interesting and can be used as supporting evidence in your essay devoted to the discussion of animal rights. What you need to try to do is formulate clearer the main points of your essay and use the examples you have found for support. I think you can keep the first point discussing the relationships among children and animals. But then discuss the point you mention last. It seems to be more logical. After that I'd turn to the the comparision b/w our rights and those of the animals: you've mentined it in paragraph 4. And then I'd consider the issue of diversity. I'm not sure you'd agree with me but it seems to me that structured this way your essay would become more logical and thus more persuasive. Let's try to revise it the way I suggest, shall we?
Hello, Rimma! I've just read your essay. You've choosen a very important topic and I find your essay very interesting. From the point of view of structure your work is well-organised. Your arguments are persuasive. It's good that you have an argument from the magazine. I've never heard about the article about Full animal rights. I will surely read it.
ОтветитьУдалитьLet's revise it again: *There are two ways in which people treat animals: cruelty by the people that don' think about animal's rights and protection (not very successful).
ОтветитьУдалитьConsider what constitutes cruel treatment of animals, on the one hand, and what demonstrates kind attitude to them. You can enumerate these points and then discuss some of them in more detail
Let's check your reference formatting: use the citation machine one more time to see whether the capitals are used in the same or different way
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